Given pie charts compares about the type of communications used in 1962 and 1982.
Overall, there was a dramatic change in communication modes over the time frame; letter communication, which was the majour domain in 1962 was replaced by telephone in 1982.
Firstly, communication using letter was popular in 1962, which accounted for exactly half of the total comunication. In contrast telephone communication was only 35 percentage in 1962 and computer used for communication in lowest occasions with only 15 percentage.
On the other hands, 1982 witnessed an exponential growth in telephone communication with almost doubled the usage with 60 percentage, and it was the largest mode in that segment. computers also gained popularity with 30 percentage,it actually doubled the usage in this year but the letter usage lost its dominance and dropped to 10 percentage.
- Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible.Discuss both views and give your opinion? 61
- Some people think that it is more important to spend public money on promoting healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. 22
- The bar chart below shows the estimated percentage of car trios taken by drivers in 2005. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...ctly half of the total comunication. In contrast telephone communication was only 35 per...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the lowest'.
Suggestion: in the lowest
...962 and computer used for communication in lowest occasions with only 15 percentage. On ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...only 15 percentage. On the other hands, 1982 witnessed an exponential growth in ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Computers
...t was the largest mode in that segment. computers also gained popularity with 30 percenta...
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Suggestion: , it
...lso gained popularity with 30 percentage,it actually doubled the usage in this year...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, so, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 136.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40441176471 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17775539104 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639705882353 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.701905167 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 5.23603664747 226% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180762691393 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127198124258 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137813504376 0.0843802449381 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165633961124 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153939143442 0.0819641961636 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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