Dear George,
I hope that you are doing great! It's been a long time since we last met. I'm writing to thank you for the wonderful stay that you have offered while I was in Kodaikanal.
Staying at your home was a truly memorable experience for me. Especially, the warm treatment by the aunt and uncle was extremely amazing. Not to mention the delicious recipes prepared by your mom, those were the most delightful dishes that I have ever had.
I must certainly mention the adventurous hill ride we had in your jeep. The most interesting part of it was where you thought me how to drive a jeep, immediately, when I asked you for it. That was really scary, in particular, when I lost control on that steep mountain road. For a moment I thought we are done. Thankfully, you took control of the vehicle instantly. I am so sorry about that, but it was a lifetime memory though.
Why don't you come to Chennai this summer after completing your final exams? Here, I will be happy to offer you an excellent vacation. From here, we can visit interesting places around the city such as Kovalam water sports, amusement parks and also you can visit the Egmore museum for collecting details for your upcoming research.
I am leaving for now. I and my parents will be glad to host you when you come here.
Best wishes,
Akil
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 74, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...Its been a long time since we last met. Im writing to thank you for the wonderful ...
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Line 10, column 5, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...it was a lifetime memory though. Why dont you come to Chennai this summer after c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, while, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 5.60731707317 820% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59243697479 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4591033862 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 106.607317073 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651260504202 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4947773129 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.2941176471 112.824112599 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.0 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.29411764706 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318794696319 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951218545168 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079629002471 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189525983613 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772322696293 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.2329268293 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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