Dear Peter,
I hope you're in high spirits. I wanted to share that I've shifted to a new house, lately.
The location where I was residing earlier was too far from my workplace. And most of my time was wasted in travelling, which moreover resulted in lot of fatigue and stress. Hence, this new house is very much near to my company and this makes things comfortable for me.
It's a beautiful well-furnished 2-bedroom, hall, kitchen apartment with two separate washrooms attached with each room. Moreover, one of the most interesting features is that, it has a small corner which I am planning to turn it into a meditation room. In addition, it has a front and a backyard, not that spacious though.
I would like to invite you for this fortnight and it's been so long that we've met. As you are brilliant at creativity and organizing stuff, So I would love to have your suggestions regarding setting up the furniture at my place.
Do let me know if you can make it for this weekend. I am looking forward to see you.
Love,
Nupur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Peter, I hope youre in high spirits. I wanted t...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Peter, I hope youre in high spirits. I wanted to share that...
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Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...in high spirits. I wanted to share that Ive shifted to a new house, lately. The...
^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...is makes things comfortable for me. Its a beautiful well-furnished 2-bedroom, h...
^^^
Line 9, column 73, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: we've
...his fortnight and its been so long that weve met. As you are brilliant at creativity...
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Line 11, column 74, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
... for this weekend. I am looking forward to see you. Love, Nupur
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Line 13, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...am looking forward to see you. Love, Nupur
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, well, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60752688172 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65417752647 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688172043011 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6407811073 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4166666667 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124358718712 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398358718344 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428840390529 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737659877562 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586631051929 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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