You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The illustration shades light on the production process of carbonated drinks which is consisted of various stages. The drinks go through five different steps before reaching the supermarkets. The first three stages are completed in a factory using chemicals and different machines whereas the last two stages deals with packaging and shipment.
Firstly, the water is cleaned, followed by evaporation and then it is carbonated. Later, the liquid is mixed with colors, syrup or flavor, filtered once again, then packed and shipped for consumption.
The first stage is called water cleaning process where pure water is filtered. After that, water softener and some other chemicals are added to the filtered water. After going through a pump, the concoction reaches electric heaters where it is heated and passed through a cooling pipe. Then carbon dioxide is added to the cooled mixer in order to make it carbonated in the second stage.
As the carbonated water reaches the mixing tank in the third stage, it is again mixed with chemicals, syrup and flavor for better taste and coloring for desired visuals. Soon, the liquid is again filtered and filled either in bottles or in cans and becomes the familiar goods we know as carbonated drinks. Finally, the packaged bottles or cans of soft drinks are then shipped in trucks to the supermarkets.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: IS_COMPRISED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of' or 'is composed of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of; is composed of
...tion process of carbonated drinks which is comprised of various stages. The drinks go through f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04324324324 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62421159331 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9555189154 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0588103798403 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0255960850806 0.103423049105 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0210382707245 0.0843802449381 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0430245247912 0.15604864568 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00835890579995 0.0819641961636 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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