You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The chart illustrates the amount of people in different times who are using subway.According to graph in different times subway is becoming more bussy.
Overall, specially in the morning times(6.00 am - 10.00 am) is subway top times.Especially in the 7.00 am is equal 400 people.Which is the high number as a passenger in daily using.
And the other hand, in the evening time(16.00 pm - 20.00 pm) is also same like a morning situation.Also, when check out the 18.00 pm is almost 400 people.But also, expect the morning and evening times, subway always had rush-hour.Noon between 13.00 pm to 14.00 pm nearly 300 people.
Choice the underground station must encourage for rest of the society.With using the public transport people can save their time,Because less private car meaning less traffic.Also less traffic is equal less carbon which is eventually meaning more healthy and more green world for our future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: According
...in different times who are using subway.According to graph in different times subway is b...
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Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'times'' or 'time's'?
Suggestion: times'; time's
... subway.According to graph in different times subway is becoming more bussy. Overa...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Especially
...s6.00 am - 10.00 am is subway top times.Especially in the 7.00 am is equal 400 people.Whic...
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Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Which
...ally in the 7.00 am is equal 400 people.Which is the high number as a passenger in da...
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Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... other hand, in the evening time16.00 pm - 20.00 pm is also same like a morning s...
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Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...m is also same like a morning situation.Also, when check out the 18.00 pm is almost ...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...k out the 18.00 pm is almost 400 people.But also, expect the morning and evening ti...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Noon
...ning times, subway always had rush-hour.Noon between 13.00 pm to 14.00 pm nearly 300...
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Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: With
... must encourage for rest of the society.With using the public transport people can s...
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Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Because
...lic transport people can save their time,Because less private car meaning less traffic.A...
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Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...e less private car meaning less traffic.Also less traffic is equal less carbon which...
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Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...e less private car meaning less traffic.Also less traffic is equal less carbon which...
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Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...less traffic is equal less carbon which is eventually meaning more healthy and more green world for o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18243243243 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04940795711 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655405405405 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.4064328878 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 191.75 112.824112599 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 22.9334400587 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0310835558342 0.215688989381 14% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0193795386283 0.103423049105 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00735861849801 0.0843802449381 9% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0193795386283 0.15604864568 12% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00735861849801 0.0819641961636 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.2329268293 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.3012195122 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.