You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The Bar chart illustrates the various type of sports like Cricket, Athletic, Martial Arts, Basketball, Swimming etc played by boys and girls in New Zealand during 2002. Data is measured in terms of percentage.
During 2002, it is very clear that most favorite sport among the sport persons was swimming whereas the least favorite sport was Athletics.
One of the most played sports by Boys during 2002 in New Zealand was soccer with participation of nearly 25% while only 5% girls participated in the same. Following that Boys were also crossed the girls in cricket and martial arts with significant difference. In Basketball and Tennis, Boys were just above the girls with minimal margin of 2-3%.
On the other hand, the sport in which numbers of girls were higher than boys was Athletics and Netball. Netball was played by almost above one fourth of total girls. While only 1% of total boys had participated in the same. Swimming was also second highest sport played by girls with around 23% in 2002.
Apart from all these categories, people participated in all other sports were almost quarter of all participants. Here Boys again left girls behind in terms of participation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...almost above one fourth of total girls. While only 1% of total boys had participated ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'whereas', 'while', 'apart from', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.291479820628 0.268076937826 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.121076233184 0.116061578633 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0896860986547 0.0759168565197 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0538116591928 0.0366838410393 147% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00448430493274 0.0131127313244 34% => OK
Prepositions: 0.206278026906 0.155750635184 132% => OK
Participles: 0.0448430493274 0.0379272487307 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.53076670685 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0 0.0210936926555 0% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0627802690583 0.0948980150116 66% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00448430493274 0.00967000014798 46% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1188.0 1161.00487805 102% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.9 101% => OK
Chars per words: 6.0 5.90752243213 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73763899035 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.313131313131 0.337110787985 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.20202020202 0.247514529752 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.126262626263 0.171178102325 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0858585858586 0.112407865282 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53076670685 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530303030303 0.546246751206 97% => OK
Word variations: 46.6829404489 49.3433353143 95% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 8.93414634146 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5 23.0094962315 72% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9796064914 42.9750493124 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 135.714022679 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 23.0094962315 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.689975730869 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.84146341463 130% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 36.702020202 47.7609492067 77% => OK
Elegance: 3.025 2.94281807926 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290636086871 0.418131533498 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121674996667 0.181151798455 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.085334147096 0.0850326197045 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.649224640072 0.706616315825 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.16798148795 0.157042692854 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13788398613 0.228904883108 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867773443963 0.108899403657 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.255938747919 0.367819155151 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.17497994866 0.0812612215331 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189923229297 0.316326947829 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877085584117 0.0921553760075 95% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70731707317 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.16585365854 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.