Dear Emily,
I hope you're doing very well. The last time we met, you expressed your interest in buying a television. Well, you'll be pleased to know that I'm selling my television. Actually, I've finally decided to buy a larger screen television, as the old one was too small for my living room.
I was wondering if you could buy the existing television from me. It is a Samsung LED Smart TV with 32'' inches screen, built-in speakers which gives great sound and a USB portal. It also has the HDMI portal to connect it to a computer. The best thing is that, it has built-in WiFi, which means you can watch Netflix and YouTube as well. I've used it nearly for an year. It is in a really good condition. I'm selling it way cheaper than it's real price.
I think it will be a great deal for you, that is why I asked you first. You can come over anytime and have a look at it.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours' lovingly,
Sania
- Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:News editor decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in news papers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we be 56
- Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? 61
- Modern technology is now very common in many work places How do you think this has changed the way we worked Do you think there are disadvantages to reply too much on technology 88
- Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime.Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be change 73
- News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would be better if more good news was reported? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, if, look, really, so, well, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 752.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27272727273 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24387941626 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8343930441 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 50.1333333333 112.824112599 44% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.7333333333 22.9334400587 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333706714113 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999989708203 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849485477386 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186307282978 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629444351112 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.5 13.2329268293 34% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 10.3012195122 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.3 11.4140731707 55% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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