Dear Emily,
I hope you're doing very well. The last time we met, you expressed your interest in buying a television. Well, you'll be pleased to know that I'm selling my television. Actually, I've finally decided to buy a larger screen television, as the old one was too small for my living room.
I was wondering if you could buy the existing television from me. It is a Samsung LED Smart TV with 32'' inches screen, built-in speakers which gives great sound and a USB portal. It also has the HDMI portal to connect it to a computer. The best thing is that, it has built-in WiFi, which means you can watch Netflix and YouTube as well. I've used it nearly for an year. It is in a really good condition. I'm selling it way cheaper than it's real price.
I think it will be a great deal for you, that is why I asked you first. You can come over anytime and have a look at it.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours' lovingly,
Sania
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...YouTube as well. Ive used it nearly for an year. It is in a really good condition....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, if, look, really, so, well, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 752.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27272727273 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24387941626 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8343930441 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 50.1333333333 112.824112599 44% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.7333333333 22.9334400587 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333706714113 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999989708203 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849485477386 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186307282978 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629444351112 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.5 13.2329268293 34% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 10.3012195122 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.3 11.4140731707 55% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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