21.09.2017 You have travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened.Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it.Find out what they are g

Dear sir/ madam,

I am writing to complain about lake of consideration of your company.

On the June 26th, I had a flight with your airline. the flight number was 2345 from Paris to London. after landing I found that my suitcase was lost. I warned your staff about this matter. Today is 5th of July and I have not received anything yet.

My suitcase was brown leathery and rectangle shape. I have some of my university documents plus personal items in it.

Since your company is responsible about passengers suitcase I hope that you find mine and give me a massage by email.
I await your prompt response.

Yours faithfully,
Minoo Zafaryan

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...26th, I had a flight with your airline. the flight number was 2345 from Paris to Lo...
^^^
Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...t number was 2345 from Paris to London. after landing I found that my suitcase was lo...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “after” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t number was 2345 from Paris to London. after landing I found that my suitcase was lo...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 545.0 937.175257732 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 113.0 206.0 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82300884956 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2603904387 3.78020617076 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53971508512 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 127.690721649 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.725663716814 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 165.6 290.88556701 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6961702789 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 49.5454545455 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.2727272727 16.8248392259 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.181818181818 4.34317383033 4% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264605846981 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087811750751 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316456903668 0.0603063233224 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124905243293 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340774708241 0.0580467560999 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.2 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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