Dear Riya,
This is Krati, who you had helped to get to the hospital after a car accident near Pedder Road last week. I am writing to you to express my gratitude for everything you did for me during this life-taking incident.
Thank you very much for the immediate help and comfort that you gave me while I was in pain. I am extremely grateful to have you around me during this bad event. From taking me to the nearest hospital and making sure I am attended immediately to informing my family about my condition; you did everything that a friend or a family would do.
I cannot thank you enough for saving my life, however, to reciprocate, me and my family would be very happy if you would come to our house this Friday for lunch. I would really appreciate if you could accept our invitation and visit us.
Looking forward to hear from you.
Yours sincerely,
Krati
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Riya, This is Krati, who you had helped to get to the hospita...
^^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...tation and visit us. Looking forward to hear from you. Yours sincerely, Krati
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, really, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 725.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55974842767 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45260440825 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610062893082 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3693562175 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5555555556 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274181180232 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132662800884 0.0766984524023 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440460671753 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179212580452 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349379376665 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.