All the people in a company should be treated equally and provided with the same number of vacations in a year.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Human rights should be provided equally to coutrymen. Therefore, employees in different companies ought to have an equal treatment and given the same number of vacations during the year. I totally agree with this; my opinion will be manifisted in the following lines.
On one hand, workers of various levels should have the same rights specially when it comes to the number of day's vacation. In other words, principals, directors and cafeteria man should be nearly equal to avoid the negative feelings among them. Not only does it kill activism but also it replaces it with slacktism. For example, a study has been published in The New York Times shows that the reason behind the successful of 75% of known companies is due to the equality between their team mambers. Hence, this ensures that team worker equality is the key to a successful buisness.
On the other hand, the unfair distribution among worker's rights may lead to a quick failure of businesses. To illustrate, the honest compitition spirit requires a safety feeling between stuff members. this is examplified by the country of Japan, wage earners are getting rights equality, which helps Japan to be a leader in industry business. Thus, taking such countries as a prime example confirm the importance of equality.
In conclusion, nowadays the power of equality mostly responsible of the successful of many businesses. I believe that all workers should gain the same number of vacation days. I suggest that governments should impose taxes on compnies if they break this role.
- many schools believe that it is beneficial to provide junk food in their schools Do you think it is a negative or a positive development 73
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- All the people in a company should be treated equally and provided with the same number of vacations in a year.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
- Many schools believe that it is beneficial to provide junk food in schools Do you think it is a negative or a positive development 73
- Some people say that in all levels of education from primary schools to universities too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills Do you agree or disagree 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...a safety feeling between stuff members. this is examplified by the country of Japan,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 937.175257732 138% => OK
No of words: 254.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09448818898 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67640100251 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 127.690721649 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637795275591 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 290.88556701 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2940655023 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2666666667 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 4.34317383033 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256872361029 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803135564777 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777343243435 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163322839523 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108972277851 0.0580467560999 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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