A colleague at work is organizing a goodbye party which you are not able to attend Write a latter to him her In the letter you should Explain reason why you cannot attendgood memories you have spenthow you will stay in touch

Dear Alex,

How are you? I hope your are great. what about the upcoming celebration of farewell, I think I may not attend the occasion.

I got an email last night, that I have to attend a interview at Bangalore on Friday, as it is a good opportunity for my career, the offer is from one of the top most company in India, which is "Google" .so, I don't want to miss the golden opportunity. In this regard, I apologize that I am unable to attend the party, which is going to held on Friday.

I have spent a great time with you, I do remember during my life time, you are a like a mentor. such that, in every important decision in my life. I will always be in touch with you on social media like Facebook, Instagram, WhatsApp and even through your personal contact number.

Yours loving,
John.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
... How are you? I hope your are great. what about the upcoming celebration of farew...
^^^^
Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...email last night, that I have to attend a interview at Bangalore on Friday, as it...
^
Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ood opportunity for my career, the offer is from one of the top most company in I...
^^
Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ny in India, which is 'Google' .so, I dont want to miss the golden oppor...
^^
Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...dia, which is 'Google' .so, I dont want to miss the golden opportunity. In...
^^^^
Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
... to attend the party, which is going to held on Friday. I have spent a great time...
^^^^
Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
... time with you, I do remember during my life time, you are a like a mentor. such that, in...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Such
... my life time, you are a like a mentor. such that, in every important decision in my...
^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ontact number. Yours loving, John.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 668.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45333333333 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66569982473 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.7278808337 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2222222222 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220238710631 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779096836157 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863810466294 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136914491438 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604082885411 0.0580467560999 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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