Dear Alex,
How are you? I hope your are great. what about the upcoming celebration of farewell, I think I may not attend the occasion.
I got an email last night, that I have to attend a interview at Bangalore on Friday, as it is a good opportunity for my career, the offer is from one of the top most company in India, which is "Google" .so, I don't want to miss the golden opportunity. In this regard, I apologize that I am unable to attend the party, which is going to held on Friday.
I have spent a great time with you, I do remember during my life time, you are a like a mentor. such that, in every important decision in my life. I will always be in touch with you on social media like Facebook, Instagram, WhatsApp and even through your personal contact number.
Yours loving,
John.
- Directors of large organizations earn much higher salaries than ordinary employees do Some people think it is necessary but others hold that it is unfair Discuss both views and give your own opinions 61
- Some people think that higher institutions should concentration more on academic subjects such as history and the physical sciences while others think that they should concentrate more on practical subjects such as car mechanics and cookery etc Discuss bo 61
- Some think that residents should responsible for keeping thier areas clean and tidy while others say it is the government s responsibility Discuss both views and state your own opinion 56
- Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate Discuss both views and give your own opinion 89
- These days it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the city Discuss some of the effects of rural depopulation migration from the country to the city and suggest some ways on which this trend could be reversed 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
... How are you? I hope your are great. what about the upcoming celebration of farew...
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Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...email last night, that I have to attend a interview at Bangalore on Friday, as it...
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Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ood opportunity for my career, the offer is from one of the top most company in I...
^^
Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ny in India, which is 'Google' .so, I dont want to miss the golden oppor...
^^
Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...dia, which is 'Google' .so, I dont want to miss the golden opportunity. In...
^^^^
Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
... to attend the party, which is going to held on Friday. I have spent a great time...
^^^^
Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
... time with you, I do remember during my life time, you are a like a mentor. such that, in...
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Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Such
... my life time, you are a like a mentor. such that, in every important decision in my...
^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ontact number. Yours loving, John.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 668.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45333333333 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66569982473 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.7278808337 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2222222222 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220238710631 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779096836157 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863810466294 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136914491438 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604082885411 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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