Dear Mr. Smith,
My name is Kumar Sampad and I am one of your neighbor, residing at 54 Danforth Avenue which is just adjacent to your big detached house from the south side. I am writing this letter to express my intense dissatisfaction regarding your way of parking cars at the side of the street.
Your entrance to the house is sharing just a single wooden fence with mine and whenever you park your newly purchased Audi SUV, it just blocks the entrance to my house partially. This is happening soon after you have started the renovation of your in-house parking lot and started placing the vehicle at the roadside. So, for the last couple of weeks, it is just causing me trouble while parking my car too on the same side. Moreover, as it covering almost fifty percent of my main gate, it feels impossible to enter into my premises smoothly, forcing me and my family to come inside in cue.
I hope you are understanding the issue and will take better strategy while parking. I would also suggest you rent a nearby parking plot so that both of us will be a win-win situation for the time being until your renovation is being completed. Or, you can make your renovation process faster so that the mutual compromisation among us will be beneficial. Hope this will keep our friendly neighborhood healthy and peaceful.
I look forward to hearing from you as early as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Kumar Sampad.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ly to come inside in cue. I hope you are understanding the issue and will take better strategy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 249.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72289156627 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56972257987 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618473895582 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.8474919286 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154528380284 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628088061035 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394217058061 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877944075764 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129457733581 0.0580467560999 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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