Dear Emily,
How are you? I hope that you've made all the arrangements for the trip. I'm writing this letter to let you know about the few details which would help you to come to my home after arriving at Melbourne train station.
Unfortunately, there is an important meeting on your arrival day which I need to attend it. So I wouldn't be available till evening. Don't worry, I've made all the arrangements so that you can have a safe way to my home. You can take my house's keys from my neighbour, John. I have already informed him about your arrival, so he won't be surprised. Just go and ask for the keys, I am sure that he would be happy to help you.
I will give you the route details on how you can reach my home from the train station. There is a taxi hub in the south exit of the station, go there and just ask for the Central Church. Make sure to ask the driver to take you from Bakers road as It's just a 20 minutes drive from there.
After you have entered my house, you would be a little hungry. I have already made lunch. So make sure to heat it in the oven before having it. You can sleep in the guest room, don't worry, I have clean the room yesterday. Have a good sleep there. I will try to reach by around 7 pm. I have already made the reservations in a fancy restaurant for the dinner. So don't eat after lunch.
I hope you will enjoy the journey. Please give a call if there is an emergency.
Yours Lovingly,
Abd
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 280.0 206.0 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.06428571429 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08830563093 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492857142857 0.622605031667 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 365.4 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 280.0 16.3608247423 1711% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1138.0 76.5299724578 1487% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 280.0 16.8248392259 1664% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.0 4.34317383033 368% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383508788483 0.216113520407 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.383508788483 0.0766984524023 500% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20872585225 0.12726935374 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814630768903 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 137.7 8.37731958763 1644% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -187.34 70.7449484536 -265% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 109.0 7.45979381443 1461% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 7.75 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 18.77 7.59969072165 247% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 8.62886597938 637% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 114.0 8.54432989691 1334% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 55.0 8.15463917526 674% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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