Freshwater has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world Today however growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem What are the causes of the increased demand and what measure could governments and individuals take to respond t

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Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 437, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...f citizens such as laundry or sanitation . Furthermore, when there are a lot of in...
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Line 2, column 764, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he lack of clean water for humans to use In order to mitigate the adverse consequ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 26.3917525773 193% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.85567010309 363% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 937.175257732 194% => OK
No of words: 340.0 206.0 165% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 3.78020617076 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20513236393 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 127.690721649 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555882352941 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 290.88556701 198% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.9750795479 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.266666667 76.5299724578 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106060212398 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451251424426 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458154397036 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863669261148 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392636592091 0.0580467560999 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 8.37731958763 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 70.7449484536 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 7.45979381443 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 8.71597938144 161% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 41.2886597938 242% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.