Dear Sahil,
I hope you are doing well since we haven’t met after having a dinner party with your family at your home. So, I am writing this letter to invite you to my house along with your family for a dinner meal. Besides, I haven’t got the time to thank you for a meal which we had at your home as I was busy at work for a few weeks and I haven’t got a minute for myself to relax even though I was working on weekends.
On that day, I enjoyed the snacks which were made by your dad, and the main course prepared by your mum. All the dishes which were served on the table were delicious. I can’t forget the taste of kebabs and the essence of curry which was cooked by your mom.
My wife and I were extremely grateful for the hospitality given at your residence. Plus, you are lucky to have amazing parents, especially your dad has a great personality. And your mother is too sweet and lovely in regards to greeting guests coming at home. I felt nostalgic at your place because it made me remember our childhood memories.
I want to meet you and your family again, and this time the venue is my residence. So, could you please help me in making further arrangements like the type of cuisine to be prepared and the wine? I’m planning the date for the coming weekend.
I can’t wait to see you soon.
Regards,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...you in the best of health and happiness Im writing this letter to express my grati...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o my place on coming Sunday for a dinner The experience was wonderful in visiting...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ur mother is one of the best cooks that Ive ever met She cooked a delicious meal al...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... served me with soft bread As I said Im throwing a birthday party for my mother...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ave family and friends on such occasions I am hoping to see you at the party R...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30964467005 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15093099876 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573604060914 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 197.0 16.3608247423 1204% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 849.0 76.5299724578 1109% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 197.0 16.8248392259 1171% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.0 4.34317383033 345% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329409478164 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.329409478164 0.0766984524023 429% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191775473105 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584233167367 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 97.4 8.37731958763 1163% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -111.56 70.7449484536 -158% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 77.8 7.45979381443 1043% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.9 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.57 7.59969072165 205% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 51.0 8.62886597938 591% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 80.8 8.54432989691 946% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 51.0 8.15463917526 625% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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