Dear Susan
I hope you are well.
I am writing to thank you for accepting the responsibility of taking care of my home and kitty when I am away.
As I have mentioned before, I want you to be present at my flat for two days and nights since tomorrow. You can easily contact me during my absence via phone call or messenger. So do not hesitate to call me if needed. I will also give you the phone number of my host for emergency occasions.
I will sort out every thing before my leave, so that there would not be any special duty for you except the kitty. The only thing remains is taking care of her food for four meals each day. The pocket on the table would be enough for two days. I will also place a bowl of milk for her to be on access during the day.
The other important thing to do is to make sure that the door is locked before you sleep. I will give you the keys just when I see you prior to my flight.
Have a perfect time with kitty
Love
Nancy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 28, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ccasions. I will sort out every thing before my leave, so that there would not...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.11398963731 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.03170922087 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580310880829 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.8971850313 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.0769230769 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.38461538462 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185765861919 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697985158111 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444148327803 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963859608731 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473214627014 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.97 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.13 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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