A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter
give contact details for when you are away
give instructions about how to care for your pet
describe other household duties
Dear John,
Thank you for agreeing to house-sit for me. If in any emergency, you may contact me on my cell phone, which I will keep with me at all times and or at the ‘Radisson Blue’ hotel in Ahmedabad where I am staying as well. I have written the numbers on the sticky note which I have left up on the fridge. In addition, there are two more notes which states my daily household chores as well.
Firstly, my dog Bruno needs the food on the mentioned time in the note. If you failed, he will start harassing you in your work. Sometimes I laugh out laughter while looking that, he is more punctual than me. Bruno’s food is kept inside the top-right shelf near the refrigerator. Just add two cups of milk in his food otherwise, he won’t eat it. In addition, take him for a short walk in the park nearside our home in the evening.
Secondly, every morning sharp at 7:00 AM, milk man will keep the milk bottles beside the main door foot steps so, remember to pick them up immediately because, our neighbour’s cat will break them a drink the milk. I would also like you to clear my mailbox every evening and keep the outside light on at night for safety reasons.
I am looking forward to seeing you on my return.
Yours lovingly,
Sunny
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 387, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ates my daily household chores as well. Firstly, my dog Bruno needs the food on ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39655172414 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34867521542 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646551724138 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2322691589 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.8571428571 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 4.34317383033 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149261510603 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610810221422 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712190234509 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790924090956 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272369867154 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.