Dear Jay,
Hope you are doing great! I’d like thank you with all my heart for the invitation. Since holidays are coming I was eager to visit your country and stay with you. Unfortunately, I won’t be able to make it to the your place since I am caught with serious family responsibilities.
I live with mother in my apartment.She is suffering from arthiritis and her condition is worsening day by day. Since my father lives in a different place, it’s my responsibility to take care of my mother in such odd times.Starting from daily household activities, I have to take care of buying medicines and making proper follow up with the doctor.Apart from this, I have office and work responsibilities too. I will surely try to come some other time.
I will be free after 3 months from now since my father will be staying in my place and take care of my mother. Can you please let me know if you are free around that time? I know you have responsibilities too but what is more exciting than two old friend cathching up after long time!
Hope to hear from you soon
With love,
Sumit
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'your'?
Suggestion: the; your
...ely, I won't be able to make it to the your place since I am caught with serious fa...
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Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: She
.... I live with mother in my apartment.She is suffering from arthiritis and her co...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Starting
...ake care of my mother in such odd times.Starting from daily household activities, I have...
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Line 5, column 354, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Apart
...making proper follow up with the doctor.Apart from this, I have office and work respo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, apart from, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64974619289 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9143776087 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629441624365 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.5580227588 44.8134815571 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.777777778 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222448052057 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110718144378 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899351881026 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143221107309 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936155289055 0.0580467560999 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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