Hi my dear, hope find you well. I am writing to express my gratitude for all you did and for the photos which are up on wall now. It was the most memorable and unforgettable trip that I had. I really do not know how to thank you.
As you know, these days I am busy with my desertification. I am going to defend it in 4 days and that is why I could not send you this letter sooner. Looking at the photos bring back so many happy memories of the time we spend together and a wonderful hospitality you extended to me. I felt completely pampered by you. You surrounded me with warm friends, amazing sights, best foods and laughter_filled evenings.
I know you always wanted to visit Canada. Why do not you come this summer. As it has the moderate weather, it is the best time for visiting and all tourists sites are open. Also, I can take 2 weeks off from my work and will have a great fun. I bet you, you will enjoy yourself a lot. I would be thrilled if you could make it.
Thank you again for the beautiful holiday and the photos, I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the best'.
Suggestion: , the best
...ded me with warm friends, amazing sights, best foods and laughter_filled evenings. ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47006568532 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9513226696 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.125 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.125 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386126245473 0.216113520407 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131978913274 0.0766984524023 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675330552802 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253549762868 0.12726935374 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201255277653 0.0580467560999 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.9 8.37731958763 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.19 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.