Last Tuesday you flew from New York to Paris. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your cabin bag on the plane. Write a letter to the airline:
- Where and when you lost your bag
- What your bag looks like
- What it is contents were
To Whom It May Concern:
I am writing to inform you that I forgot to take my bag from the airplane. I am Amir Nazaripoor and I flew from New York to Paris destination last Tuesday on 12th of July with fly number NY315 of Paris airline. Unfortunately, when I leave airport I understood that I forgot my handbag in airplane. I should mention that I sat on B14 seat. Our flight was flown with two hours’ delay and due to this subject I lost my concentration and really forgot to take my bag. I put my stuff on dashboard which located above my seat. It is made by lather and has black color with two semicircle handle and three zips on it. In addition, it is not big and has rectangular shape and also you can see a silver color metal plate which was written the brand of bag on it. The content of my bag are a few paper, my phone charger, a book and some pen and pencil. I ask you that please help me to find my handbag. If you need more information about me or my bag. Please call me by number 9876543210 or send me email by email@gmail.com.
Your prompt response would be highly appreciated.
Faithfully yours,
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| 2021-04-22 | apurvparekh30 | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 588, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'handle' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'handles'.
Suggestion: handles
...and has black color with two semicircle handle and three zips on it. In addition, it i...
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Line 2, column 788, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun paper seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little paper'.
Suggestion: little paper
... bag on it. The content of my bag are a few paper, my phone charger, a book and some pen ...
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Line 2, column 871, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help me find' instead.
Suggestion: help me find
...e pen and pencil. I ask you that please help me to find my handbag. If you need more informatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, really, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25821596244 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63831386258 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615023474178 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7768366541 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.7692307692 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219269211489 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704811803275 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695298171931 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090765274142 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831549216641 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.