Dear James,
I hope you and your family are well. I just read your email regarding the difficulty you are facing at your work place recently. Firstly, I am glad that you chose me to discuss your problem with as it explicitly shows your true faith in me.
Secondly, I can assure you that this matter will be resolved swiftly, if you follow my advice completely because I had experienced a same issue at work last year. We have twenty four hours of shift in hospital and we are two doctors on the floor with one duty mobile. But my colleague always used to get eloped from the hospital after giving me the phone and I had to see all the patients which was quite unfair and exhausting.
Later, I came up with an idea of dividing the time, so, it was decided to keep the phone for twelve hours by each of us. Thus, the conflict was resolved feasibly. Since, you are also a doctor, it is comprehensible that you must be having the same problems.
In light of this, I advise you to assimilate the notion of diving hours with your peer doctor to solve this matter. I hope, my suggestion will be helpful to you.
Yours sincerely,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear James, I hope you and your family are well. I j...
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Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ollow my advice completely because I had
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 26.3917525773 19% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 311.0 937.175257732 33% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 69.0 206.0 33% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50724637681 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.8821214171 3.78020617076 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34191418861 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 55.0 127.690721649 43% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.797101449275 0.622605031667 128% => OK
syllable_count: 97.2 290.88556701 33% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6804123711 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.6612548407 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.75 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.25 4.34317383033 328% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332841370334 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186513912926 0.0766984524023 243% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277270125146 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230222710449 0.12726935374 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755240999968 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 41.2886597938 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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