A motorway is to be built near your house. As you think that is will destroy areas of natural beauty. Write a letter to the local authorities. In your letter
• Express your views
• Explain what damage will be caused
• Suggest alternative routes
Dear sir/ madam
I am writing in concerning with an announcement published by local authority about building a motorway in Bringtone Street. I have been living in this street since 20 years ago. Adding this structure in this street will cause some problems.
First of all, as you are aware, there have been historical buildings and a beautiful park in it, since many years ago. These features have made this street to a busy place and people with different ages from child till old commute in it. As a result commuting motorcycles in this street will be dangerous for children and old persons.
Another serious problem is related to air pollution which affected people and park greenery. This air pollution demolish natural beauties as well as influence growing of flowers.
I suggest that if it could be possible to replace the motorway with cycling way. By this changing the condition would be better for all people and local community of Bringtone Street. Also, can preserve trees and flowers.
As these problems are serious please reflect them to the authorities to make an appropriate decision.
Yours faithfully,
Mitra Riahi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, well, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14361702128 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59187778768 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654255319149 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6710159995 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3846153846 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4615384615 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120626312664 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457387288975 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464701146347 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0514640425736 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402931637597 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.