Dear Sir,
My name is Mary Anne, a resident on St George's street, lane no. 5. I am writing to apply for the voluntary work position that your museum has posted in Times job last week.
I am a student at Oxford university, studying History as my Honors. So as having a good understanding of the ancient artefacts that are there in your museum, I would like to take this opportunity of volunteering at the museum and share my knowledge with the people visiting the museum. Also, such work will be added to my internship year as well as on the Resume which will really help me to outstand during my job search.
Along with the knowledge, I would like to share my skills as well, I have great communication skills, I am fluent in English and in Spanish which is a plus point as this museum have many visitors from Spanish speaking country. Also, as this museum is located near my house, I have been a regular visitor to the museum due to my interest and sometime for my study purpose. So, I have a good knowledge of which artefacts are placed where and the importance of them.
I would really appreciate to have this voluntary work at your museum. I would be available to start the work from 12th December till mid of January, as my Winter vacations are starting from then. I will be waiting for your positive reply.
Thank you.
Your Faithfully
Marie Anne
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'appreciate having'.
Suggestion: appreciate having
...e importance of them. I would really appreciate to have this voluntary work at your museum. I w...
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Line 8, column 197, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...inter vacations are starting from then. I will be waiting for your positive reply...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, really, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52822580645 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51514339152 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552419354839 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.828635224 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5833333333 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280882604115 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11463011337 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120092556455 0.0603063233224 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193010710722 0.12726935374 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728413454477 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.