The news company is going to start a new program on TV about a particular place. Write a letter to offer your suggestions on what the program should be like.
In your letter, you should tell:
• how you know about that place
• what suggestions you would like to make
• why you are offering these suggestions.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in regards to the opening of a new program on your news channel. I was overwhelmed to hear about this program which will show the beautiful views of the Himalayas.
I completed my graduation in computer science engineering from Shimla which is the capital of Himachal in the Himalayas of India. This state has a pleasant atmosphere in summers and extremely cold weather in winters.
I would suggest you to explore the valleys in the mountains of the Himalayas. Most of them are located near my college. Besides, some of them are still not covered by the media channels. I will be sending you the list if you would require while exploring the new valleys of the Himalayas.
These unexplored locations have astonishing environmental changes along with different kinds of weed plants. Every valley created in these mountains has a story which you can listen from the locals living near those valleys. Moreover, it would be best to communicate with private automobiles like cars because these areas lack in public transports vehicles.
I wish you all the best for the first shoot of the program.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
- Television has changed the quality of life for an ordinary person Do you agree or disagree 61
- Some people think that teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole Do you agree or disagree 78
- More and more people today are using computers and electronic devices to access information Therefore it is no longer any need to print books magazines or newspapers To what extent you agree or disagree 73
- Many people these days travel far for work or spend more hours working Does this trend have advantages or disadvantages What do you think about work life balance 56
- Many people these days travel far for work or spend more hours working Does this trend have more advantages or disadvantages What do you think about work life balance
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir I am writing this letter in regards to the opening of a new program on your ne...
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Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rs and extremely cold weather in winters I would suggest you to explore the valle...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d extremely cold weather in winters I would suggest you to explore the valley...
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Line 9, column 354, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...areas lack in public transports vehicles I wish you all the best for the first sh...
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Line 11, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... best for the first shoot of the program Yours faithfully Shwatank Bhasin
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Line 14, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...am Yours faithfully Shwatank Bhasin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, moreover, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96428571429 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60763204804 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 196.0 16.3608247423 1198% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 973.0 76.5299724578 1271% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 196.0 16.8248392259 1165% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 46.0 4.34317383033 1059% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228548173859 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.228548173859 0.0766984524023 298% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1116198788 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705535643054 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 99.9 8.37731958763 1193% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -119.0 70.7449484536 -168% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 78.5 7.45979381443 1052% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.67 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.14 7.59969072165 226% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 8.62886597938 626% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 80.4 8.54432989691 941% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.