Dear sir or madam,
I am writing this letter to you regarding most important item had lost during holiday vacation as your company provided.
I lost my magnificent Sony camera gifted on my birthday, it was my memorable gift. My uncle purchased it around 6000 rupees. The model number is T854281 manufactured in 2015, in addition inside camera 64GB memory card had kept, it costs around 1500 rupees, the total worth of my item is 7500 rupees.
During vacation, while on the way to the hotel we descended bus and went to see a spectacular ancient fort then I returned back and checked my camera. It was not there, which I put on the seat while moving down, immediately I checked all the passenger's bag but no use I could not find.
When I returned to the home and checked your Company's insurance form that my item fully insured. Please provide compensation to my thing or else send me a check, myself I will purchase a camera.
I look forward to hearing from you and thanks in advance
yours sincerely,
Shiva.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returned'.
Suggestion: returned
...o see a spectacular ancient fort then I returned back and checked my camera. It was not there...
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Line 11, column 26, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e a camera. I look forward to hearing from you and thanks in advance yours ...
^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...ring from you and thanks in advance yours sincerely, Shiva.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, regarding, so, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70165745856 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52174693306 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685082872928 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.1826996341 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5555555556 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170144874963 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681037508589 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901212642811 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110602755387 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111682021959 0.0580467560999 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.