Hi Ahsan,
Hope you’re doing well. It’s been a long time since we met last time, and I think we should make a meet-up plan next month.
Yesterday, I was recollecting all the times when we used to sit in the library for long and discussed the series of events in the books out of our love for book reading. I’ve recently read a very awe-inspiring book named “A thousand splendid sons” written by one of the most prolific writers Khaled Hosseini. This book addresses the core issues related to women empowerment particularly in underdeveloped countries and suggests the ways how females can be encouraged to ensure their participation in all sectors.
Since you’re working exclusively on a special project on “Erudition of Young Women” by United Nations in Pakistan, I thought this book would be extremely useful for you to refer in order to motivate the parents to send their girls to school and colleges for enlightenment.
The book has been published by a globally recognised publisher, so it is available in all major bookstores across country. Alternatively, you can purchase an e-book online from Amazon.
See you next month!
Regards,
Ammar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... See you next month! Regards, Ammar
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24870466321 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0822004689 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.704663212435 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.6530746333 44.8134815571 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.555555556 76.5299724578 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287210122565 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109884222068 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648888186047 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163561223379 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792934233529 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 8.37731958763 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 8.71597938144 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 7.59969072165 129% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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