Recently you have traveled by plane and during the journey you had an issue with one of airline employees. Write a letter to the company manager and say– Give details of your flight.– Describe the issue you have encountered.– What do you expect the

Dear Sir / Madam,

I am Abed Joy, a passenger of your airlines that brought me here in Singapore from Dhaka yesterday. I am writing this letter to you to file a complaint that I have received the worst possible customer service during my recent flight in your airlines.

My flight number was BDG4531. It took off from Dhaka at 8:15 AM and arrived at Singapore at 12:20 PM. In this 4-hour period, I faced terrible customer experience along with other passengers onboard.

There were three flight attendants on that flight which was inadequate for a plane carrying 120+ passengers. However, all three flight attendants were not efficient and careful enough in meeting the demand of the passengers. I asked a glass of water several times so that I can take medicine but no one was responding for that call rather those three flight attendants gathered in aisle and gossiping. It was very much annoying not only for me but also for all the other fellow passengers.

I demand an explanation and apology for this type of customer service and also demand a proper investigation to sort out the problem and fix that accordingly. As a manager of the airlines, I hope you will take proper action against those irresponsible flight attendants of that flight for the betterment of your company.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,
Abed Joy

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9224137931 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70418282729 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 344.7 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.803312527 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8461538462 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17213836495 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627962577032 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732667234399 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106726921851 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688444381295 0.0580467560999 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.