Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inquire about a recent opening of waiter at your restaurant. I want to apply for the post and would like to meet you in person to discuss more about the prospect.
Currently I am working at Nick's Joint as a waiter and has held an experience in this field for 3 years. My earlier workplace include the greats like Taj, Four Seasons and The Mariot. I hold a diploma certificate in hotel management and work extensively with varied restaurants of different cuisines. My career highlights include being a head waiter at the Taj and has received certificate of excellence along with employer of the month at Four seasons. I am proficient in English and has good communication skills which are utmost required skill for the job. Happy to work in shifts and provide guidance to new joiners.
Usually my work timings are from morning 10 to evening 6 after that i am free for an interview and would like to share more details at our meeting. Looking forward to hear from you.
Yours faith fully,
Gunjan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld like to meet you in person to discuss more about the prospect. Currently I ...
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Line 5, column 480, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Four seasons. I am proficient in English and has good communication skills which ...
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Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...from morning 10 to evening 6 after that i am free for an interview and would like...
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Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...details at our meeting. Looking forward to hear from you. Yours faith fully, Gunj...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73369565217 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62007820162 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635869565217 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8512739508 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1818181818 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220795521684 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769021444404 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649504744142 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144747863476 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737919311899 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.