There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
a. Describe what the problems are
b. Explain how these problems are affecting you
c. Suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir,
I am a regular passenger on the 382 bus service. I have always considered, it to be a good service both punctual and tidy. Having said that, over the last two week this situation has been changed. The 382 bus is no longer reliable and clean.
The bus arrives and departure time has been predictable due to which we are unable to reach the office on time. Nonetheless, the last two days bus was not only late; but also failed to stop. In order to solve this, you have to instruct the bus driver to be disciplined enough to understand the value of time of the customer.
In addition, the vehicle is no longer clean as it previously was. There is plenty of litter under the seat which does not allow us to sit comfortably and breathe in fresh air. To remedy this, train the clearer about the importance of sanitation.
The deterioration of the 382 bus services are unacceptable, and I request you to take everything possible step to return the service to its formal punctual and clean level.
I look forward to your swift attention to this matter.
Yours Sincerely,
Kirti
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, nonetheless, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5618556701 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57697420366 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623711340206 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1133979957 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0769230769 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175117720844 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599267765375 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418499340604 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810682586716 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056422517874 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.