There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ...........,
You should write at least 150 words.
DEAR Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the consistency of ongoing bus service in Erin Mills area of Mississauga city. The buses are not arriving on time as scheduled and most of the buses are heavily crowded and this problem is obstructing my work life balance on daily basis.
I regret to inform you that your service is below my expectations as I usually get late at work , As a result my everyday routine is getting disturbed. Moreover, due to delayed arrivals most of the buses comes heavily crowded and sometimes you have to wait for another one to reach your destination easily by having seat availability. However all buses are air conditoned, but because of overcrowding sometimes air conditioning has no effect as well.
I trust that you will give this matter your urgent consideration and look forward to receiving any suggestions you might have to overcome this problem.
Thanking You in Anticipation.
Yours Sincerely karan Gulati
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...pectations as I usually get late at work , As a result my everyday routine is gett...
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Line 4, column 199, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'buses'' or 'bus's'?
Suggestion: buses'; bus's
...er, due to delayed arrivals most of the buses comes heavily crowded and sometimes you...
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Line 4, column 336, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ion easily by having seat availability. However all buses are air conditoned, but becau...
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Line 10, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... You in Anticipation. Yours Sincerely karan Gulati
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10429447853 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97920614334 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.687116564417 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.2883442298 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 4.34317383033 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151194580207 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587799450907 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421486593267 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765489625115 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449903598851 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 70.7449484536 60% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.