There is a problem in the road outside your house.
Write a letter to your local councilor. In your letter
introduce yourself
explain what the problem is
tell the councilor what you would like to be done
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you about a road issue which is outside my house on Avenue Road.
My name is Ricky Tran, and I have been living at number 26 Avenue Road for 13 years. I have never had any complaint to the council before.
Two weeks ago, a plothole appeared on the road in front of my house. I mean it is a large hole and on a rainy day, the hole is filled with water, so it might be dangerous for drivers who are not paying enough attention. The pothole is also an eyesore for those who are living in the vicinity.
I have tried to call to the council offices so many time, but nothing has been done. So, I would like to request you can address this matter as soon as possible.
I look forward to the problem being resolved.
Yours faithfully.
Ricky Tran
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 48, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...tried to call to the council offices so many time, but nothing has been done. So, I would...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, i mean
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 661.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26451612903 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13407028548 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683870967742 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0231971698 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4444444444 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159747410483 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617899066158 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674782699432 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772369916072 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442222306382 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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