It is argued that children are facing extreme pressure from society in today's time than the children in olden times. I completely agree because in this small age they must be along with the competitive world which help in fast improvements and better future but in limited way.
In this fast metro world, we see children are more pressurised from the society for many reasons. Firstly, they are forced to avoid leisure time by watching TV or playing video games. Secondly, improving subject information by going for extra classes or practical classes. Finally, forcing them to opt for too many subjects like art and music. In addition, learning new languages which makes them highly improved and make them better. But care must be taken that it must not stop the child's interest from their favourite hobby.
For the better future of a child, the people in the society even pressurise the to find solutions like limited using of polluted vehicles and avoiding outside food giving better health. So, to be prepared for these problems, society people pressurise to lead their life to better environment with better living.
I conclude by agreeing that pressure from the society is increasing more for preparing them for different issues coming in their future life.
- Some people think that money is the best gift for teenagers. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
- Some people believe that children should be given lessons on how to manage money in the school. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Today’s children are living under more pressure from the society than children in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 89
- For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree? 61
- Nowadays people are influenced by fashion, in particular when choosing their clothes and hairstyle. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ty even pressurise the to find solutions like limited using of polluted vehicles ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07619047619 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42015347801 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62380952381 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3174292512 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9090909091 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186643441653 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767596862397 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100664787425 0.0603063233224 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133383879905 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845958450974 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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