Dear ABC,
Hi, I am hoping you are keeping up in good health and spirits. I am thankful to you for letting me stay in your apartment for 5 days. Unfortunately, your expensive silver lined plate was broken by accident and I thought to inform you about this. I will explain the situation further ahead.
As, I was with family staying in your beautiful house. my son was playing football inside the dining room. Although, I told him to play outside so that anything will not break because of the ball. but, as you know children never listen in spite of my warning he kicked the ball so fast that the decorative silver lined plate which was placed in the clauset. Suddenly, fell out and broke out. When I confronted my son he started crying so I did not scolded him much. sorry, my buddy for this mishap and I know the thing is important for you as it was a gift from your father.
I know it's value is priceless and it cannot be fixed but still I want to apologize for my son's mistake. if you do not mind I will like to repay the cost of that broken plate and even if possible I will try to get the exact same piece from the market. Please accept this as a token of my mistake.
I am blessed to have a friend like you and again I am extremely sorry for what happened.
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 291, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ll explain the situation further ahead. As, I was with family staying in your beau...
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Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...family staying in your beautiful house. my son was playing football inside the din...
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Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...ing will not break because of the ball. but, as you know children never listen in s...
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Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'scold'
Suggestion: scold
...d my son he started crying so I did not scolded him much. sorry, my buddy for this mish...
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Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sorry
...d crying so I did not scolded him much. sorry, my buddy for this mishap and I know th...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... want to apologize for my sons mistake. if you do not mind I will like to repay th...
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Line 4, column 125, Rule ID: WILL_LIKE_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'would'?
Suggestion: would
...r my sons mistake. if you do not mind I will like to repay the cost of that broken p...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, you know, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.17886178862 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25894861238 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60162601626 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1689861007 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5333333333 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285864649148 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890929577227 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883155171063 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176463636891 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901836681029 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.