Hi Timmy,
Hope you are doing good and enjoying your vacation in Bahamas with your family. I am very much grateful to you for considering and trusting me with your house and pets in your absence. Outdoor plants are being watered twice in a day and indoor plants once in a day. The dogs are being served pedigree three times in the meal along with their daily protein bars as per directions.
However, last night a burglar was trying to broke into the house through the backyard door. I informed the cops, the moment I saw him. But, unfortunately the cops could not make it on time and I had to throw on him your favourite bowl present next to me in order to prevent him from entering the house. In the process of prevention, the bowl broke and I am very apologetic towards the loss of your favourite bowl which your parents bought you from Paris.
As I am entirely aware of your fondness to that bowl, I can understand the pain and thereby, ask you for your forgiveness.
Wish you a great and adventurous trip.
yours sincerely,
Andvd.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...you a great and adventurous trip. yours sincerely, Andvd.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55263157895 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40226693492 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621052631579 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4457960001 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6363636364 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309250574924 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11866635464 0.0766984524023 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985643685272 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180959985583 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057155728052 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.