Dear John,
I am so glad to hear that you already decide to come to New Zealand for a vacation, I understand the first time is exciting as well as an adventure so let give you pieces of advice.
I would say you'd better come here in autumn because all the tasty fruits are ready so if you come we could go to orchard pick the fruits that we like. Besides, the autumn yellow leaves will make sunning views in the season because you will see a wide range of colors in the mountains.
I suggest you go to South Island to stay in Queenstown for a week, you do not have to plan just walk along the lake, the peaceful is the best natural experiences that you could remember for a long time.
We have a guest room in Auckland so after your South Island trip, you can come and stay here. You cannot imagine how I excited about our reunion.
Kind regards,
Joe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'd
...ve you pieces of advice. I would say youd better come here in autumn because all ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 702.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25454545455 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11713894647 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642424242424 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7097128627 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.285714286 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135107568491 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550419819888 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478906979481 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857243446635 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182148462401 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.67 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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