Write a letter to a friend you have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged
. apologise for damaging the production
.Explain what happened.
.Say how are you doing to fix the issue
Hello! How are you? I am fine. I hope you are also in good health. I am writing this started to apologise my mistake.
Last month, I was going in Chandigarh in sector 10 market for shopping. Suddenly I look there it is again bookshop. So I was told for purchase the book for you. Because I know that you that you are come in next month in my home. It is a good book it's get it to politics and you are also like this book then I came back to home and sit in car and on the way for house that time I thought for reading books suddenly my sister was saying for drinking water then I open the bottle of water and water thrown into bottle and go into a book and a book was damage, I'll picture books are Tami that you are come in next month in my home. It is a good book it's get it to politics and you are also like this book then I came back to home and sit in car and on the way for house that time I thought for reading books suddenly my sister was saying for drinking water then I open the bottle of water and water thrown into bottle and go into a book and a book was damaged, all pages of books damage with water and I give many adverts for repair the book pages and all I also give hate to book pages but they book car damage then I was very sad so I am sorry to you if I go to the shop again I definitely purchase book again.
Yours truly
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ne. I hope you are also in good health. I am writing this started to apologise my...
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Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...was told for purchase the book for you. Because I know that you that you are come in ne...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'that you'.
Suggestion: that you
...rchase the book for you. Because I know that you that you are come in next month in my home. It i...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 558, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...d go into a book and a book was damage, Ill picture books are Tami that you are com...
^^^
Line 3, column 957, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d go into a book and a book was damaged, all pages of books damage with water and...
^^
Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tely purchase book again. Yours truly Aman
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 5.05154639175 297% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 282.0 206.0 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.80141843972 4.54256449028 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.86470881826 2.54303337028 73% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.372340425532 0.622605031667 60% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 354.6 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 178.765139797 44.8134815571 399% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 97.4545454545 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 16.8248392259 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137075688528 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818042096144 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592032799469 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137290409982 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301095084685 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.06 8.71597938144 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.11 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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