Write a letter to a friend.you have borrowed something from and it get damaged.
1) Apologize for damaging the product
2) Explain what happened
3) Say how are you hoing to fix the issues.
Dear Vivan,
So sorry that it's been long that i write you, but at last I am writing to explain why i have not return your hard drive.
To be honest, I was feeling guilty. I just have to own up that i damaged the hard drive accidentally. I'm so sorry because i know how important the hard drive is to you, has it was given to you by your late Uncle.
What happened is that i was coping some document from the hard , While copying the hard drive mistakenly slip out of my hand causing damages to the usb cord of the hard drive.
I have given it to our I.T personnel to please help check and fix any issues that might occur. Anyway it should be as good as new when i get it back next week and then I'll send it to you.
Again, I'm so sorry for any inconvenience it might have cause you. I hope you please forgive me.
Best wishes,
Tara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...an, So sorry that its been long that i write you, but at last I am writing to ...
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Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you, but at last I am writing to explain why i have not return your hard drive. ...
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Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ling guilty. I just have to own up that i damaged the hard drive accidentally. Im...
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Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... i damaged the hard drive accidentally. Im so sorry because i know how important ...
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Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... damaged the hard drive accidentally. Im so sorry because i know how important th...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rive accidentally. Im so sorry because i know how important the hard drive is to...
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Line 7, column 23, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ur late Uncle. What happened is that i was coping some document from the hard ...
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Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...i was coping some document from the hard , While copying the hard drive mistakenly...
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Line 9, column 26, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: T
...hard drive. I have given it to our I.T personnel to please help check and fix ...
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Line 9, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to please help check and fix any issues that might occur. Anyway it should be as...
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Line 9, column 137, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...Anyway it should be as good as new when i get it back next week and then Ill send...
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Line 9, column 170, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...w when i get it back next week and then Ill send it to you. Again, Im so sorry ...
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Line 11, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...and then Ill send it to you. Again, Im so sorry for any inconvenience it might...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.09580838323 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07662184247 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62874251497 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0256313089 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.4 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219741129696 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081311765413 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508622424549 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125694339702 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395233725992 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.2 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.