Dear Sir,
I am Bhanuprakash, Am writing this letter to you for the purpose of party celebrations. I know your hotel was the second biggest hotel in Hyderabad with more facilities so I and my friends are decided to do a special surprise party in your hotel.
I will explain briefly, My Childhood friend coming from Canada and his birthday is on 12th October 2019. However, after 5 years he is coming to Hyderabad so my childhood friends are planned to make a special party. We are expecting total guests are 20 members so we want one big hall with Central Air Conditioner facility and Special dishes for guests. We are very grateful if you are arranging the live music system. The Program will start at 7:00 P.M. so before the party starts we want all the recommended dishes and deserts are ready. We want a 4KG Chocolate Cake with Tom Logo.
As well as we want to use a swimming pool after-party so if you are providing these all the facilities we are very affordable to you.
We are expecting a positive and fast reply from you it is helpful to take quick decision for us.
Yours Faithfully,
Bhanu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: Am I
Dear Sir, I am Bhanuprakash, Am writing this letter to you for the purp...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...pecial surprise party in your hotel. I will explain briefly, My Childhood frie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, however, if, second, so, well, in brief, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.585 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57669846897 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.897194443 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3636363636 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 4.34317383033 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212897189336 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798789333191 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618868807874 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137317159833 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870774766646 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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