Write a letter to professional photographer saying you liked the photos of your family members taken by him and would you like him to take pictures of another event in your family

Dear John,

I am writing this letter to appreciate your photographic skills on my toddler’s birthday party which happened last month. Everyone loved the photos and thank you very much for exhibiting your photographic talents in our function. Most of the photos were candid and we were confused which photo to frame. The pictures were lucid, apparently every detail in the picture were seen clearly. The best part is everybody those who were present in the function were captured beautifully. Especially, the pictures of my sister and my nephew were greatly recognized by many people.

I would like to let you know that we have get-together event coming up next week. Since the photographs of the previous event turned out to be too good, I would like to book you for this event too. I am sure your photos will make the event more memorable and fascinating. Please block your calendar for next weekend. Venue and other details will be shared through message/email. Also, please do let me know if you need any additional properly such as party hats, balloons etc. Looking forward for your quick response.

Yours’ faithfully,
Chitra

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, if, look, so, such as, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06842105263 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7154069498 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673684210526 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1124666472 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7857142857 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5714285714 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251300378177 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808591321694 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538599521186 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158859103702 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052543196852 0.0580467560999 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.