Dear Gautam,
I hope you are doing great. Well, today I am writing this letter in requesting for seeking help to set up the equipment for tomorrow’s meeting in the conference hall on the fifth floor.
As I said, the meeting will take place tomorrow in the hall. The meeting will take place from 9 am to 3 pm with all new clients. Plus, I have to host the meeting as discussed by our general manager. I have made arrangements for lunch and morning snacks for our guests and meeting coordinators in the cafeteria. Also, I have booked some small meeting rooms for our guests to have a private discussion in advance.
However, I was not able to set up the equipment because it was occupied by another department. I will take a half-day leave as I have to early morning at the office tomorrow to inspect all the preparations. Thus, I would request you to please ensure to check the availability of mike, speakers, and projector in the conference hall for my presentation as I will present some new ideas to our clients.
I hope you will take care of my request.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vate discussion in advance. However, I was not able to set up the equipment b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63959390863 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7326717061 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553299492386 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6294494451 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1666666667 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226171227992 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776233229617 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619147600605 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131943399759 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652539541785 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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