Dear Pooja,
Hope you are doing well and in pink of health. I am writing this letter to inform you about my cousin sister who is travelling to Hongkong for work purposes. It would be great if both of you can spend some time together during her stay.
My little sister is working with DBS Bank as a compliance officer and needs to visit Hongkong branch at Kowloon next month. She is a very social and fun- loving person. I have already spoken to her and she is looking forward to meet you.
Firstly, she will land early morning and will directly head to her hotel where she has scheduled her meetings. Despite her hectic schedule, she would love to meet you and pass you some home cooked food. In addition, if you need anything from here she can carry for you too. As her meetings will end early evening, both of you can catchup for dinner. Since her hotel is very near to you place, I believe it would be quite convenient for you to meet up too.
Let me know your plans so that I can coordinate with you and my sister accordingly.
Best regards,
Nur Amirah
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...poken to her and she is looking forward to meet you. Firstly, she will land early mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, firstly, if, look, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41708542714 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14859234839 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628140703518 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8303899056 44.8134815571 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.6153846154 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193470913635 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069499871988 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445586989963 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113594982665 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403435447458 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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