Write a letter to your friend, who is visiting a city that you are familiar with
1) Describe to him the place orth visiting.
2) Eating Options
3) Transport Options
Dear James,
How are you? Hope everything is working perfect in your life. I amazed when I knew that you are going on vacation trip to France next month. Let me make clear some details as I have went on this trip in my holidays.
At first, the Sapphire hotel is the best rated accommodation with WiFi , free breakfast as well as a window view to see the Eiffel tower. Perhaps we misses that view until now. Besides, some of the worth places are church, museum as well as London bridge.
Secondly, cheap and convenient pubs are mainly on the high street near to the central parks.Similarly, the restaurant the french cuisine in the popular eatery in the France. Also, do enjoy the reasonable price of buffet near the public auditorium. Moreover, a people in droves rush to the free snacks offered in the evening nearby mthe market streets of Paris tower.
Lastly, a day pass is better for you go around the city tour of the France. As a result, it is vital to commute through public transport instead of renting car which is time-consuming process due to lack of knowledge of traffic rule of the city. Simultaneously, cost-effective passes borrowed through online booking to fasten the distance through tour buses.
See you soon after your short journey and do write me your experience of your vacation.
Best regards,
Jasmeen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[6]
Message: Note: went is a past participle of "wend". Did you mean 'gone' (past participle of "go")?
Suggestion: gone
...et me make clear some details as I have went on this trip in my holidays. At first...
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Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s the best rated accommodation with WiFi , free breakfast as well as a window view...
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Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'miss'
Suggestion: miss
...iew to see the Eiffel tower. Perhaps we misses that view until now. Besides, some of t...
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Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...we misses that view until now. Besides, some of the worth places are church, museum as well...
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Line 11, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Similarly
...e high street near to the central parks.Similarly, the restaurant the french cuisine in ...
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Line 11, column 122, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tral parks.Similarly, the restaurant the french cuisine in the popular eatery in ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... do enjoy the reasonable price of buffet near the public auditorium. Moreover, a ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ming process due to lack of knowledge of traffic rule of the city. Simultaneousl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87012987013 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63699766562 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0443731842 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104623997152 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301801953667 0.0766984524023 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427574052239 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0584941062676 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547770332735 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.