Dear Manager,
I am writing to inform you about my computer that is giving me some issues connecting to VPN. As you are aware, this week am working from home on a rotational shift basis under blue team, so cannot directly connect my system to LAN. I have already raised a ticket with regards to this problem to IT helpdesk. The ticket is pending supervisor approval.
Last week, an antivirus was run on my computer as always, apparently there were no issues then. When I tried connecting this morning, the access was denied and I was unable to login. I presume this has nothing to do with the updates that are run on weekly basis rather it has something to do with my system. Generally, I do face minor issues with this system but fortunately they are settled immediately by IT helpdesk.
Due to this situation, I am unable to deliver some tasks that are due today. Therefore, I seek your kind assistance to push forward the date for today's meeting. Also, please do approve my request that has been raised by my colleague this morning. Rest assured, once the issue is resolved, I will try to finish my work as soon as possible.
Awaiting your prompt approval and reply.
Yours sincerely,
Nur Amirah
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...ing to VPN. As you are aware, this week am working from home on a rotational shift...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, if, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69158878505 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49124591874 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626168224299 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5584084424 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7142857143 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2857142857 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131450978499 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476371436566 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448253056563 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081061831912 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521268729736 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.