Dear sir,
Greetings of the day! I am Steve Sen, working as technical assistant in your company. As a matter of fact, through this letter, I want to suggest you a name of top employee of our company to whom you are looking for. He is Mr. Keith, head of the technical department.
That being said, Mr. Keith is serving this company since his early twenties with great dedication and determination. Apart from that, he always look after the concerns of this company selflessly, and provided a strong background in the terms of raising company's goodwill which made it recognisable in the state's top 10 technical companies in 2018. So, after looking his contributions rigorously, I could not find anyone else for this prestigious award over him.
However, I also want to list some traits of good employees here. First of all, good employee must be diligent, spontaneous, hardworking, dedicated and more importantly must be punctual. And, Mr. Keith has all these virtues in his personality, so he is the most suitable person to consider here for the best employee of the Year award.
I hope you would find my suggestion helpful. if you allow, then I would also send his work records to you by making a summary. Thanking you for involving me in the selection team.
Yours sincerely,
Steve Sen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... Greetings of the day! I am Steve Sen, working as technical assistant in your c...
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...nt in your company. As a matter of fact, through this letter, I want to suggest ...
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... a matter of fact, through this letter, I want to suggest you a name of top empl...
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...termination. Apart from that, he always look after the concerns of this company self...
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...rovided a strong background in the terms of raising companys goodwill which made ...
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...er looking his contributions rigorously, I could not find anyone else for this pr...
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... prestigious award over him. However, I also want to list some traits of good ...
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... of all, good employee must be diligent, spontaneous, hardworking, dedicated and...
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...employee must be diligent, spontaneous, hardworking, dedicated and more importan...
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... more importantly must be punctual. And, Mr. Keith has all these virtues in his p...
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...e you would find my suggestion helpful. if you allow, then I would also send his w...
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...the selection team. Yours sincerely, Steve Sen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, then, apart from, as a matter of fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88288288288 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76947545912 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.778424855 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3846153846 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0769230769 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242026513822 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788931959988 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612939018866 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134851441286 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542928992317 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.