You and your family are living in a rented accommodation in an English speaking country. you are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.Write a letter to the landlord. I your letter- introduce yourself- explain what is wrong with the fu

Dear Mrs. Smith,

I am writing to you to express my dissatisfaction regarding the egrereous condition of some furniture in the house my family ranted two days ago.

My name is Jim. I am the oldest son of Mr and Mrs Pan who ranted your house from 8 to 10 February 2017. My family and I appreciate the location of your house, which is a few minutes walk from the beach. However, we discontent with the condition of the furniture inside.

Some of the furniture are so badly maintained that dust covered its surface. My family and I had to sit on floor. Besides, the beds in your house are unsanitery. My parents and my little sister suffered from hives after sleeping on it. We all regret that we did not cancel our reservation on the first day when we entered your house.

I would like wo request a full refund for our suffering in your house. If you need any proof, please feel free to contact me.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully,
Kim Pan

Votes
Average: 7.5 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...e condition of the furniture inside. Some of the furniture are so badly maintained that ...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, look, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49162011173 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51241417003 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63687150838 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6850862825 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.4285714286 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7857142857 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162335143318 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541156801482 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352446763877 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909447448949 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172888043231 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.87 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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