Dear Mr.Smith,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I have been applying for my dream job and I would require your valuable feedback on not only my skill sets but also on my personal abilities.
As you already know, I have a huge passion for computers and especially interested in working in the IT sector. I am applying for the Data Science Engineer in one of the reputed organization. Data has been playing a vital role in many industries such as Telecom, IT and Medical. Apart from this, it would be an added value to my portfolio and career progression.
As per the company protocol, an application should be attached with a reference letter from any university professor. Otherwise, scheduling an interview would be extremely hard.
In your letterhead, please mention about my academic achievements and my proactive nature in studies. You might also consider mentioning other details such as my character and punctuality. On top of this, your contact details and university stamp should be included.
I look forward to your response.
Yours faithfully,
Sudheerkumar Motakatla
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Smith
Dear Mr.Smith, I am writing this letter to inform ...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...and especially interested in working in the IT sector. I am applying for the Data Scie...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17222222222 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97111090335 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644444444444 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9870184965 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5833333333 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18669133968 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618344303643 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499796577544 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819179185024 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617504102797 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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