You are applying for a job As well as attaching a CV you need to write a cover letter explaining your reasons for choosing this particular job at this particular company and why you would be a good hire Things to include are 1 Possible qualifications or r

Essay topics:

You are applying for a job. As well as attaching a CV, you need to write a cover letter explaining your reasons for choosing this particular job at this particular company, and why you would be a good hire. Things to include are:

1. Possible qualifications or reasons for you to be hired

2. Your energy and enthusiasm for the job

3. Your past experience in a similar position.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this with regard to the advertised position of, required marketing manager in the johnson associates, in the Sunday Times newspaper on 24/7/19.

To begin with, I am farwah ahmad. I received my Master's in business administration. Before that, my undergraduate degree is in business administration as well. Besides, I have strong communication, interpersonal, and critical thinking skills.

Further to this, I have since worked in a private advertising firm as an advertiser. Where my main responsibilities were to make an effective brand strategy, to head a team of six members and give them innovative ideas to launch new products, to make creative advertisement for the new launch product, and to sell the product. Moreover, I believe in customer satisfaction so, and I have a strategy of think less like a manager and more as a consumer. To do this, I stay engaged with the consumers through feedback.

I believe I have all the relevant experience required. Please, find my CV attached for your perusal. If you have any further questions, you can contact me on the given mail address.

I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.

Yours sincerely,

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Average: 8 (5 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this with regard to the adv...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...rsonal, and critical thinking skills. Further to this, I have since worked in a priva...
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Line 11, column 437, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...y of think less like a manager and more as a consumer. To do this, I stay engaged ...
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Line 19, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you at the earliest. Yours sincerely,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, moreover, so, well, as to, to begin with, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13636363636 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20428575493 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671717171717 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6033449627 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2307692308 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 4.34317383033 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148147736851 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478466601481 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051035232938 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828758095459 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564634844967 0.0580467560999 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.