Dear Mr. Joe,
I have been working as senior chemical engineer in operations' department at your company for 6 years. I am writing this letter to express my interest to work in other departments of our company preferably in technical service team.
I thoroughly enjoyed working in the current job as it given me many opportunities to learn new things. My current job is becoming monotonous, and it is not having any scope for further innovation. I feel my career is stagnated in the company for the last two years. So, I am not able provide more value to the company in this role. However, I think now it is a time for me to explore new horizons in the company. So, I would like to take a job change in our organization.
Let me explain the reasons for the job change. As you can see from my attached resume, I am a data scientist, and I have completed masters program in data science, machine learning. I have a keen interest in doing data analysis of our company data and provide more useful insights about our company operations to enhance the profitability. I will also get benefited because of the role change by utilizing the growth opportunities in the new department that I would like to move. I would be grateful if I could be considered for the requested job change.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
Srinivas Reddy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...referably in technical service team. I thoroughly enjoyed working in the curre...
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Line 7, column 481, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...w department that I would like to move. I would be grateful if I could be conside...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...idered for the requested job change. I look forward to hearing from you. Be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, i feel, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61983471074 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78595764554 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557851239669 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 364.5 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6606891931 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5333333333 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1333333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.93333333333 4.34317383033 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277857331643 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778269391768 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448570952659 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164034805047 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253073839989 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.