Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to thank you for seminar you performed at our university last week. Not only instructors but also students were happy to attend it and I hope our university will host you in the near future.
First of all, presentation was done at university primary conference room on main campus on 23rd August.
Secondly, it was job related consequently university students at 4th grade mastered vitally important facts and experiences. It also made professors revise teaching tecniques. Further and more importantly, attendance certificate will be beneficial for all participants in their professional lives given the fact that getting such documents will assit them landing a job.
Finally, I would like to suggest you give a seminar on Climate Change at next International Phenomenons and Threats Seminars which are held o 10th February every year at university. If it is impossible, I would like to recommend you to be a guest instructor her for three months so that your studies will be funded by local authorities and there will be innumerable doctorate students who will be ready and happy to work with you. I hope you will consider these suggestions carefully.
Thank you once again for great seminar and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Mary Brown
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you soon. Yours sincerely, Mary Brown
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12558139535 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9182330904 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693023255814 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2544013992 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.181818182 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 4.34317383033 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0916545044904 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381593408416 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317107156425 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0540391978485 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324181737409 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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