Dear Eddie,
I hope you are fine and everything goes well these days. I can't believe, It's been long time that I haven't seen you. Actually, I'm going to study in your country and I'm going to start by September. Fantastic for me!
You know that I've tried a lot to be accepted in a university for my master program which could provide me with a scholarship, but it didn't happen. I will definitely apply for a grant but as long as I'm on my own, it is impossible for me to afford everything. So, I've decided to find a part-time job to be able to manage my expense.
I'm writing to ask you about the possible job vacancies in your area. I would be grateful if you could help me to organize some interviews for the next month, and beside all of these, is it possible for you to ask your manager if there is a job opportunity in your department? You know that I'm completely experienced in computer programming. Please ask me if you need any information.
I can't wait to see you again.
best wishes,
Pooneh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... and everything goes well these days. I cant believe, Its been long time that I have...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...cant believe, Its been long time that I havent seen you. Actually, Im going to study i...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... time that I havent seen you. Actually, Im going to study in your country and Im g...
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Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
..., Im going to study in your country and Im going to start by September. Fantastic ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ber. Fantastic for me! You know that Ive tried a lot to be accepted in a univers...
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Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed in a university for my master program which could provide me with a scholarshi...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...d provide me with a scholarship, but it didnt happen. I will definitely apply for a g...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...nitely apply for a grant but as long as Im on my own, it is impossible for me to a...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ssible for me to afford everything. So, Ive decided to find a part-time job to be a...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ob to be able to manage my expense. Im writing to ask you about the possible j...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...unity in your department? You know that Im completely experienced in computer prog...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...k me if you need any information. I cant wait to see you again. best wishes, ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Best
...n. I cant wait to see you again. best wishes, Pooneh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37037037037 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63754358303 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608465608466 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3521065054 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8333333333 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348877890315 0.216113520407 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12777823567 0.0766984524023 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796699235044 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209423177214 0.12726935374 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973470626745 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.